A while ago, I posted chapter one of my book; Discovery. Its in a series which I'll write called Elementals. I'm really excited about finishing it, I've written sixteen chapters so far, and I'll be posting them.
Here is it, enjoy!
Two-Will Alvaro
I could hear laughing coming from the Japanese building, but I stepped inside anyway.
A girl and boy sat at a bench, the girl pointing at his screen and laughing. “Your face!”
She said. “You look like a cow hit with a shovel.”
A girl and boy sat at a bench, the girl pointing at his screen and laughing. “Your face!”
She said. “You look like a cow hit with a shovel.”
The girl’s dark brown hair was swept over one shoulder, and her eyes were bright gold,
she was wearing skinny jeans, pastel blue high top converse and a plain white shirt
which read ‘Not today, Satan!’ in pain black lettering. The white shirt complemented
her coffee-brown skin beautifully. She seemed so happy, and I felt horrible for intruding.
I turned to go, but the boy looked over. “Hey.” He said. “I'm Alex, this is-”
she was wearing skinny jeans, pastel blue high top converse and a plain white shirt
which read ‘Not today, Satan!’ in pain black lettering. The white shirt complemented
her coffee-brown skin beautifully. She seemed so happy, and I felt horrible for intruding.
I turned to go, but the boy looked over. “Hey.” He said. “I'm Alex, this is-”
“Hazel.” The girl, Hazel, cut in. “Hi.”
I nodded to them. “Hello. I'm Will. Do you mind if I use a computer?”
“Of course not.” Hazel said. “We’re not using all of them.” She gestured to the other
computers, almost smacking Alex in the face. He gently pushed her arm down. “I like
my head intact to my body, thanks.”
computers, almost smacking Alex in the face. He gently pushed her arm down. “I like
my head intact to my body, thanks.”
She looked at him. “Oh, sorry.”
I walked towards a computer next to Hazel. “Whatcha playing?” I asked.
“Minecraft.” She replied. “You wanna join our world?”
“I am a total god at Minecraft, peeps, so you'd better watch out.”
She and Alex laughed, and I grinned. We played around for a few hours, then the sun
started going down. Hazel’s stomach rumbled. “Im starving.” She said. “You guys
wanna get dinner together?”
started going down. Hazel’s stomach rumbled. “Im starving.” She said. “You guys
wanna get dinner together?”
Alex nodded. Hazel turned to me. “Yeah, sure.” I said.
Alex fixed his gaze on Hazel. “Do you have any clue where the cafetera is?”
“Nope.” She pulled something out of her back jean pocket. “But this map does.”
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