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Wednesday, 22 May 2019

The Hook for: The mysterious observer

This is the hook for the start of the story, Ill post the rest separately. Hope you enjoy!

The mysterious observer

The boat began to sink. I fought the urge to scream. My small wooden boat was filling with water,
but there was no hole, no crack, no nothing. I peered at the island looming at the distance. I
figure stood on the sand, arms thrust out. “Dude.” I thought. “You had to sink my boat.
Why not the one over there? The pirate ship. Surely they deserve to be sunk.”
But no. The mysterious figure stood strong on the seashore, and I was probably going to drown.

All because of a misunderstanding.

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